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Feb. 28th, 2005 08:11 amIn honor of the Oscars (no, I didn't watch them either)...
A while back, I posted a haiku challenge, with the winner to receive the coveted and rarely-bestowed title of Grand Master Hinode.
After a prolonged period ofsobering updeliberation by the distinguished judges, the panel has drawn a blank still life bicycle conclusion, or rather a series of conclusions:
First Prize for Excellence in Form goes to.... (drumroll please):
Distant sound of geese
Grey shapes across the sky ya --
Can snow be far off?
(
christeos_pir)
Ya just can't beat a good ya.
However, in a last-minute surprise decision, First Prize for Reverse Psychology in Haiku goes to:
That is good to know /
I've never won anything /
before in my life
(
devbrain)
And the Distinguished Award for Obviousness in Intent is awarded to...
I bet if I try //
I can fill this whole journal //
with silly haiku
(
devbrain)
Extra bonus points for High Irreverance given here:
Tickled by a post
Tied up, then feathers start ... oh!
Not that type of post?
(
devbrain)
And Eminent Mention for Admirable Sentiments here:
Telephone lifestyle //
It gives little in return //
Rethink important
(
devbrain)
and here:
Who cares about rules --
The whole point about haiku
Is to make you see things in a new and different way.
(
christeos_pir)
So, the final result is...you guessed it...a dead tie, with technical purity and subtlety vying with overwhelming numbers and exhausting variety. Kind of a classic east versus west scenario, in other words.
christeos_pir and
devbrain, you have both won the use of the coveted title Grand Master Hinode for a period not to exceed 2 migratory cycles of the Japanese (Red-crowned) Crane or the end of your attention span, whichever comes first.
To both of you, congratulations, Hinode-shi!
For those genuinely interested in haiku, and perhaps somewhat more substantial contests, check here.
and this is just neat: http://www.gumballpoetry.com/flash/
I'm also fond of haiga. Check it out.
In conclusion, what can I end with but another haiku:
Words float on the breeze
Like cherry blossoms; haikus
by lunatic friends
A while back, I posted a haiku challenge, with the winner to receive the coveted and rarely-bestowed title of Grand Master Hinode.
After a prolonged period of
First Prize for Excellence in Form goes to.... (drumroll please):
Distant sound of geese
Grey shapes across the sky ya --
Can snow be far off?
(
Ya just can't beat a good ya.
However, in a last-minute surprise decision, First Prize for Reverse Psychology in Haiku goes to:
That is good to know /
I've never won anything /
before in my life
(
And the Distinguished Award for Obviousness in Intent is awarded to...
I bet if I try //
I can fill this whole journal //
with silly haiku
(
Extra bonus points for High Irreverance given here:
Tickled by a post
Tied up, then feathers start ... oh!
Not that type of post?
(
And Eminent Mention for Admirable Sentiments here:
Telephone lifestyle //
It gives little in return //
Rethink important
(
and here:
Who cares about rules --
The whole point about haiku
Is to make you see things in a new and different way.
(
So, the final result is...you guessed it...a dead tie, with technical purity and subtlety vying with overwhelming numbers and exhausting variety. Kind of a classic east versus west scenario, in other words.
To both of you, congratulations, Hinode-shi!
For those genuinely interested in haiku, and perhaps somewhat more substantial contests, check here.
and this is just neat: http://www.gumballpoetry.com/flash/
I'm also fond of haiga. Check it out.
In conclusion, what can I end with but another haiku:
Words float on the breeze
Like cherry blossoms; haikus
by lunatic friends
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Date: 2005-02-28 08:24 pm (UTC)let no noisy storm threaten
your coveted prize!